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[mh_candy]

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Luật chơi nói chung là đơn giản Tớ có 1 cái lời bài hát, cụ thể là bài Every Heart của BoA. Tuy là lời tiếng Anh nhưng lại là tiếng Anh của người Hàn nên nó có hơi *bị* nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp Kính mong mọi người ra tay "vạch lá tìm sâu", phát hiện & sửa lại các lỗi ngữ pháp trong đó cho đúng. Và quà tặng sẽ là 10KL$ cho mỗi lỗi tìm được + sửa đúng!

Và đây là đề bài:

Every Heart - BoA

Tell me babe, how many do I shed my tears?
Every Heart, Every Heart is not a gentle yet
Shall I do? I can never say my loneliness
Every Heart doesn't know so what to say or what to do

I was afraid of darkness, cause I felt that I was left alone
So I prayed for help to the distant million stars

*Round & round the planets revolve round the sun
And we always seek after love and peace Forever more
Growing growing woe baby we can work it out
Look up at the sky Every Heart is shining all today

Show me now, what kind of smile do I come across?
Every Heart, Every Heart can take a step towards the dreams

All of us want to take a lasting happiness
Whenever you feel sad, I wanna hold you & give you a sound sleep

Someday Every Heart's gonna free and easy
We have peace of mind
Someday all the people find the way to love

**Goes & goes the time goes on we are not alone
We live on together and we will find some precious things
Sometime we will smile sometime we will cry somehow
Don't forget believing yourself - Tomorrow's never die

There is the warm heart places on my mind
In my earliest day's there and it's so sweet
There are many stars They have talked with me so kind
They say yes, always time's a friend of mine So shine

Repeat *
Repeat **

Mọi người chơi vui vẻ!

[linh_bebu]

thế phải sửa hết tất cả à, khó ghê nhỉ

[mh_candy]

khó ạ? nhưng cứ đọc là thấy sai ngay í mà chị

Vậy sửa lại luật chơi nhé

[mh_candy]

ơ, thế ko ai thích chơi trò này à? Tết nhất rỗi rãi mà, mọi người vào đây chơi cho vui
Nếu ai muốn sửa 1 lyric dễ hơn *ít lỗi hơn >_<* có thể post lên giùm tớ

[Cloudee]

Originally Posted by mh_candy

Tết ở nhà rỗi việc, nghĩ ra cái trò này , mời bà con cô bác, những người yêu KEC cùng vào chơi!

Luật chơi nói chung là đơn giản Tớ có 1 cái lời bài hát, cụ thể là bài Every Heart của BoA. Tuy là lời tiếng Anh nhưng lại là tiếng Anh của người Hàn nên nó có hơi *bị* nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp Kính mong mọi người ra tay "vạch lá tìm sâu", phát hiện & sửa lại các lỗi ngữ pháp trong đó cho đúng. Và quà tặng sẽ là 10KL$ cho mỗi lỗi tìm được + sửa đúng!

Every Heart is my favorite song. I listen to it almost every day ^^.

*Round & round the planets revolve round the sun

The mistake here is "revolve round". We can replace it by "revolve around" (=orbit).

**Goes & goes the time goes on we are not alone

May be... "Time goes on" is not right. It should be "Time goes by".

Sometime we will smile sometime we will cry somehow

"Sometime" has a different meaning from "sometimes" and "some times". In this situation, I think we should use "sometimes".

Don't forget believing yourself - Tomorrow's never die

I'm not sure, but "Don't forget to believe in yourself" may be better for this.




I will try to find out more mistakes in Every Heart's lyrics. Anyway, I really love this meaningful anime OST ^__^ (love Inu Yasha )

[Cloudee]

Yeah, I've found more ^^.

Tell me babe, how many do I shed my tears?

"Tears" can't be counted, so this question should be "How much do I..." or "How many times do I..."

Look up at the sky Every Heart is shining all today

"Look up" is not suitable here. "Up" can be erased.

Don't forget believing yourself - Tomorrow's never die

"Tomorrow is never die"???!. We can write "Tomorrow never dies" or "Tomorrow 'll never die" instead.




Ooops... I don't think the lyrics of "Every Heart" can have so many problems like that .

[tommyhehehe]

Chả bít bài nài là bài mô....Chỉ nghe Eminem vs LP thôi...Ai post bài nào của Emi lên để sửa lyric đi

[mh_candy]

Originally Posted by tommyhehehe

Ai post bài nào của Emi lên để sửa lyric đi

Nhạc của Eminem mà dám bảo là sai lời hả Emi là người Mỹ mà

@Cloudee: You've disappeared for a long time ^^ Oh yes, Every Heart really has lots of mistakes You found out some that I didn't see, yet it still have some that you didn't find out Anyway that's just because it is not from a native ^^

[tommyhehehe]

@Nobita: Ý tớ là làm sai lời đi xong ôi` post lên để sửa... thik lòi!!!

[mh_candy]

Thế thì chỉ cần tìm lời gốc mà so là ra chứ gì nữa

[tommyhehehe]

Có phải lời gốc nào cũng đúng đâu....Tui down lời về nghe vs chỉnh đi chỉnh lại mãi....

[mh_candy]

Originally Posted by tommyhehehe

Có phải lời gốc nào cũng đúng đâu....Tui down lời về nghe vs chỉnh đi chỉnh lại mãi....

Ừ hứ... Good point ^^

Tuy nhiên tớ ko post lời Eminem đâu, lời dài đọc mà sửa thì muốn chết luôn.

Đây là lyric In The End của LP, bản nhiều lỗi nhất mà tớ có thể thấy
Thử sửa xem nào

(It start with)
One thing, I dont know why
It doesnt even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind
I designed this rhyme
To explain the due time
(All I know)
Time is a valuable thing
Watch it fly by as the pendulum swings
Watch it count down till the end of the day
The clock ticks life away
(Its so unreal)
You didnt look out below,
Watch the time go right out the window
Tryn to hold on to
Didnt even know, I wasted it all Just to
(Watch you go)
I kept everything inside
And even though I tried
It all fell apart
What its meant to be
Will eventually be, a memory of a time,

When I tried so hard, and got so far
But in the end, it doesnt even matter...
I had to fall, to lose it all...
But in the end, it doesnt even matter...

One thing, I dont know why
It doesnt even matter how hard you try
Keep that in mind
I designed this rhyme
To remind myself
How I
(Tried so hard...)
Dispite the way you were mocking me
Acting like I was part of your property
Remembering all the times you fought with me
Im surprised it
(Got so far)
Things arent the way they were before
You wouldnt even recognize me anymore
Not that you knew me back then
But it all comes back to me
(In the end...)
You kept everything inside
And even though I tried it all fell apart
What it meant to be, will
Eventually, be a memory of a time

When I tried so hard,
And got so far,
But in the end, it doesnt even matter
I had to fall, to loose it all
But in the end, it doesnt even matter

Ive put my trust, in you
Pushed as far as I can go
For all this
Theres only one thing you should know...

I tried so hard,
And got so far,
But in the end, it doesnt even matter
I had to fall, to loose it all,
But in the end, it doesnt even matter

[Trang]

Tui thích nhất bài " My love" của West Life, nghe mãi không chán
An empty street
An empty house
A hole inside my heart
I'm all alone
The room are getting smaller

I wonder how
I wonder why
I wonder where they are
The day we had
The song we sing together

And all my love
I'm holding forever
Reaching for the love that seem so far...

So i say a litte prayer
And hope my dream will take me there
Where the sky are blue
To see you once again,my love

Over seas from coast to coast
To find the place i love the most
Where are seas are green
To see you once again,my love.

I try to read
I go to work
I'm laughing with my friends
But i can't stop to keep myself from thinking

I wonder how
I wonder why
I wonder where they are
The day we had
The songs we sang together

And all my love
I'm holding forever
Reaching for the love that seem so far...

So i say a litte prayer
And hope my dream will take me there
Where the sky are blue
To see you once again,my love

To hold you in my arms
To promise you my love
To tell you from my heart
You're all i thinking of

I'm reaching for a love that seem so far...

So i say a litte prayer
And hope my dream will take me there
Where the sky are blue
To see you once again,my love.
TRời, sao mà nó ý nghĩa thế nhỉ!!!!!!!!!